It seems the Myspacers are looking for their poetical twin on my site again. As always, I am here to help out those who ask. So I did my thirty minutes on Technorati and did you know that Myspace hosts some very eclectic porn sites? Bit of a surprise that. However, we are here to find the worst poetry we can so that the Myspacers who come here can find it faster. Today’s entry comes from ElectricDreams. Prepare for lingual ipecac my friends
Waiting ’til the moments right,
to understand and stop the fight.
The pain of holding on’s to strong,
I know that I’ve held on too long.
Knowing things about his past,
circumstances never last.
Using all the hope inside,
and letting go with the oceans tide.
He lit the fire that made me see,
How unstable the mind can be.
The moment left me with hurt and pain,
that stories over, I’m not the same.
And now the second chance has come,
to finish off what’s left undone.
I loved him once, he broke my heart,
I finished something I couldn’t start.
And now I’m here today with you,
to tell the story… “What not to do!”
I’ve made my choice, I’m moving on,
for whatever it takes, no matter how long.
Complete with image of broken heart. I also like the way in which our writer used an apostrophe in the word ons. Dearie, in such a circumstance poetic license fails and one should just use “on is” even if it messes up the strange rhythm you have going on.
Of course, I like to compare and contrast so here is the other side. A little lost love from e.e. cummings
it may not always be so;and i say that if your lips,which i have loved,should touch another's,and your dear strong fingers clutch his heart,as mine in time not far away; if on another's face your sweet hair lay in such a silence as i know,or such great writhing words as,uttering overmuch, stand helplessly before the spirit at bay; if this should be,i say if this should be- you of my heart,send me a little word; that i may go unto him,and take his hands, saying,Accept all happiness from me. Then shall i turn my face,and hear one bird sing terribly afar in the lost lands.